6. A narrative

In a narrative you describe/tell a real/imaginary past event/story. This event/story can be funny emotional, thrilling, funny, terrifying, etc.

Writing a narrative

Think about your reader! Is your narrative easy to read?

  • Give your narrative a clear beginning, middle and end.
  • Use a separate paragraph for each main idea.
  • Use linkers to connect your ideas.
  • Use different past tenses, not just the past simple.
  • Use time expressions to sequence events:
    First, ... ; In the end, ...
  • Describe atmosphere and feelings as well as what happened.
  1. Use the past continuous to set the scene and to show longer action, the past simple for main events, and the past perfect for events that happened earlier.
  2. Use the present simple to talk about current situations or feelings, or the present perfect to say how events have influenced you today.

Get ideas

  • Think of an event or story to write about. Remember, it doesn't have to be true.
  • Make notes to answer these questions:

    What happened? When did it happen?
    Where did it happen? Who did it happen to?
    How did people feel? What happened afterwards?

Plan

  • Put your ideas in order. What happened first/next/in the end?
  • Organize your ideas into a paragraph plan.
    For example:
Paragraph 1 Introduction to the story
Paragraph 2 Main events I
Paragraph 3 Main events II
Paragraph 4 Final (What happened afterwards)


title: The time we first met
to describe feelings
  • I was / felt (terrified, delighted, etc.)
  • I felt ... and ... at the same time.
  • It was a terrible shock / wonderful surprise.
  • I've never been / felt so ... before / in my hole life.
  • ... was so (adjective, e.g. sad) that ...
  • ... was such a (adjective+noun, e.g. great day) that ...
Adverbs to comment on events
  • amazingly, ...
  • Luckily, ...
  • Sadly, ...
  • Unexpectedly, ...
  • incredibly, ...
  • Fortunately / unfortunately, ...
time expressions
  • I (past tense) while / when I (past continuous)
  • For / since / just / ever / never /already / yet (with past simple)
  • Last year / yesterday / a few days ago (with past simple)
  • Before I (past simple), I (past perfect)
  • After / Because / By the time / when I (past perfect), I (past simple)
  • Suddenly, ...
  • Just then, ...
  • At that moment, ...
  • Meanwhile, ...
  • While that was happening, ...
  • During (that time, the afternoon, etc.)
other narrative sequencers
  • At first, / First, / In the beginning, / First of all, ...
  • Next, .../ Then, .../ After that, ..
  • Eventually, .../ Finally, .../ In the end, ...
  • Afterwards, ...
Reflecting on events
  • It was the (best, worst, most frightening, etc) day of my life!
  • It was a day / time I'll never forget.
  • I'll remember this day / time forever.
  • Since that day / time, ...
  • It changed my life (forever)
  • Things will / would never be the same again.